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steammmpunk ([personal profile] steammmpunk) wrote2007-04-12 02:58 am

Walk Like An Egyptian

For SGA Manga Art Challenge Thing. It's Ouke no Monshou AU. Ouke no Monshou (王家の紋章 Crest of the Royal Family) is a manga created by Hosokawa Chieko, first published in 1976. You can read a very brief storyline of the manga at wikipedia by clicking the title if you are interested. But all you need to know is that John is a young Pharaoh in ancient Egypt, and Rodney is a teenager who was accidentally sent back in time to ancient Egypt by a curse. They meet, fall in love, and get married. (Along the way, Rodney was enslaved and tortured, and there's some war, but that's that.) Considering that they are King and (sort of) Queen of ancient Egypt, there's a very slim chance they wouldn't die a tragic death at young age, but this is my AU so they grow old together and live happily ever after.

After some painful, failed attempt to mimic 70s manga style (by 70s manga I mean Japanese shojo manga published in the 1970s. They are quite distinctive in style), I just settled for big eyes, improbable hair, and flowers blossoming in the background. John and Rodney are both about 14 years old (because I had a perfect excuse for doing that), and I made them wear heavy eye make up. Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] wicked_socks, for preventing this to be abandoned forever.




oh wow

[identity profile] lishel_fracrium.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 07:47 am (UTC)(link)
*stares* it's so beautiful the colors!!! ummm will you be writing this AU? *looks hopeful*
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! And no, I'm not a writer. :)

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[identity profile] th-esaurus.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 07:50 am (UTC)(link)
Nghh! Amazing! The colours!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 01:09 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this.
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[identity profile] wistfuljane.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 07:55 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, so vibrant and just I love the theme.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I like the idea of them in ancient Egypt setting, too.

[identity profile] loves-bitch.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 08:08 am (UTC)(link)
This is just LOVELY! Very shojo-ish.
It makes me think of the art from Erocia in Love
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm really glad you thought it's shojo-ish.

[identity profile] sonadorita.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 08:28 am (UTC)(link)
This is gorgeous!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!

[identity profile] lavvyan.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 08:49 am (UTC)(link)
Ohhhh, so pretty! I love the soft, gentle colouring and Rodney's big blue eyes. *sighs happily*
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 01:26 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, sweetie. I'm thrilled that you liked this! Yay!

[identity profile] le-mot-mo.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow. This is so beautiful. I love the colours you used-- vibrant and alive. And your eye for detail is amazing. Their jewelry is gorgeous.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* Thank you very much! I'm so glad you liked this. I'm pretty obsessed with details, which can pains me sometimes, so I'm happy that worked for you.

[identity profile] gillianinoz.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 10:13 am (UTC)(link)
That is just beautiful! The colours, the wonderful jewellery - and oh, their eyes!!

Really gorgeous!!

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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 01:38 am (UTC)(link)
I'm really glad that you liked this. Thank you very much!

[identity profile] seratonation.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 11:09 am (UTC)(link)
OMG that is soo pretty!

A small part of me is going why is Rodney the girl? but its a very small part and it got distracted by Johns hair :D

I love the colours, and all the gold ornaments, especially the eagle, and the *waves hand* cape thing, how it stretches out, and how the colours around their eyes match thier eye colour, and their hands! :D:D Love it :D
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 01:52 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I'm thrilled that you liked this.

Actually, I was a bit bothered by making Rodney the girly one, but in the manga, the heroine has blond hair and blue eyes, which is kind of important in the storyline, so I had no choice really. :)

[identity profile] bunsdarien.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
The picture is just gorgeous. Awesome job!And I'm with everyone else, the colors are beautiful. :)
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 01:55 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! It makes me very happy that you liked this. :)

[identity profile] porntestpilot.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 12:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I think it is totally fair to say that Rodney is a queen.

That is so pretty! The lines, and the color use, and the detailing. Gorgeous! Now I want to go put things in my hair like John's.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
Hee. Rodney would make one totally bossy, dramatic queen.

Thank you very much! I'm thrilled that you liked this, so I'm gonna go find something that I can put in my hair.

[identity profile] psyko-kittie.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 01:49 pm (UTC)(link)
*stares* Wow! The colors are amazing... the whole thing is beautiful *sniffles* I wish I could draw like that :(
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this. :)

[identity profile] pegasus-01.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, absolutely gorgeous! And let's face it, there's always a good excuse to draw boys as 14 year olds with heavy make up and big eyes when it comes to shojo manga. *nodsnods*
This drawing is amazing! I love the colors, and the flowers, and the HANDS! Crap, how long did it take you to draw the hands?! And everything is in proportion, and... yah, it's just fantastic. Great job! I'm glad you didn't abandon it!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
there's always a good excuse to draw boys as 14 year olds with heavy make up and big eyes when it comes to shojo manga. *nodsnods*
Yes, it so is. It's like a prerequisite. *g*

Thank you so much for the kind comment! It didn't take much time to draw their hands, but I spent some time to twist my hands in awkward positions. *g* I'm really glad that you liked this!

[identity profile] insight2.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 04:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh the colors :) And the green around John's eyes *g*
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 02:35 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* Thank you! I think the green eye make-up will bring out green in John's hazel eyes, if it's done for real.

[identity profile] niangao.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. Very cool. Love the vibrant vibrant colors, their hands, and the shading on John's (very nice) tummy :)
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Yay, thank you so much! I'm really glad that you liked this. Mmmm, John's tummy. :D

[identity profile] rignach.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 05:34 pm (UTC)(link)
It is amazing and the colors are perfect. It works together beautiful. Really a shame that there is not the Au storie to go with that wonderful piece of art. But maybe instead dieng a tragic death at a young age getting sent to our present time Atlantis.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 02:51 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked this! And that would be hilarious. :)

eygpt

(Anonymous) 2007-04-12 05:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this the colors are so vibrant I too want to see an au of this. Ijust love the way they both look so sweet
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you for commenting! I'm so glad you liked this. An AU would be cool, I guess. :)

[identity profile] thady.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow! This is amazing! I especially like the colours and the hand holding.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 02:57 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you liked this, thank you very much! I like them holing hands. :)

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
*stares*

hee, john's pointy ear!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, thank you! We mustn't forget John's pointy ears. *g*

[identity profile] pentapus.livejournal.com 2007-04-12 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, pretty! (and I am staring at John's abs and forearm rather fixedly. Mm.)
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 03:04 am (UTC)(link)
Yay, thank you very much! (And I totally drew John's abs and forearm to my liking, but he's young and riding horses in the war and stuff, so um, yeah.)

WOW!

[identity profile] lady-vader67.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
such talent and I agree its just breathtaking

I love the detail and how John is clutching Rodney's ring finger and so pretty and lush

thank you!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 03:07 am (UTC)(link)
You're quite welcome. I'm so glad you liked this, and thank you for the lovely comment! :)

[identity profile] zabbers.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 07:00 am (UTC)(link)
that's gorgeous. (also, <3 John's ears. well, ear.)
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-14 12:44 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! We all loves John's ears. :D

[identity profile] stereowire.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 08:43 am (UTC)(link)
Dude, okay, I should comment because I keep coming back to look at it XD You totally hit my sekrit and overwhelming love for the color orange where it counts, man. <3 :D!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-14 12:46 am (UTC)(link)
YAY Thank you so much! I like the color orange, but it's sort of hard to get it right, so I'm really thrilled that worked for you! <3<3
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[identity profile] wicked-socks.livejournal.com 2007-04-13 09:41 am (UTC)(link)
DUDE. WE TALK FOR LIKE TWO HOURS AND YOU DON'T TELL ME YOU POSTED?
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this picture is gorgeous! the details are AMAZING on the jewelry, and i love how john's cape swoops and the squiggly border detail! and rodney's hair and the different colored eyeliners! and the softness of the cloth, especially john's um... skirt thing that is not a skirt and i cannot think of the name of. kilt? or is that just scottish? anyways, lovely work! and it really does look like shojo. :D Very good job!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-14 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
Uh. I have a chronic disease that caused by a virus called TSV (Three Seconds Virus). It makes one's memory to last for 3 seconds. The virus can transmitted through phone lines, but we don't know about the involvement of internet connection yet. But you should aware of the possibility. XD

Eeee, I'm so glad that you liked this, and even more glad that you thought it looked like shojo. And I have no idea what that skirt-not-quite-skirt thing called. ;) Thank you so much for the lovely comment, sweetie.
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[personal profile] anna_luna 2007-04-13 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
:D Ohh, the pretty!

The colors! The *hair* and the incredibly amazing jewelry!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-04-14 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* Thank you very much! I'm really glad that you liked this one! ♥

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