Rodney at the Window

[steammmpunk]

On Earth, Rodney's gazing at John coming back from his morning run, with his other love of life: a mug of coffee. The mug design came from Penguin Mugs.

Comments

[ileliberte.livejournal.com]

I love the way you color, very definite and rich but not overdone. The shirt is a thing of beauty and the parts of the window sill right under his arm and behind his shirt look great. And as always, mmmmm the hand is absolutely gorgeous. Some slight problems, the mouth is...a little too long possibly and just a bit off, and the writing on the mug might need to be just a bit more curved, it's making the mug look flat, but those are minor quibbles, I just keep staring at the shirt. Very nice :)

[steammmpunk.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I love your comment and suggestions, please keep spoiling me with your nifty advice. ♥ I think - as we all know and love, Rodney's wide mouth is his distinctive feature, so I just keep thinking "his mouth is wide" obsessively and overdoing it a little when I draw his mouth all the time. And yes, the letter definitely needed to be more curved; I was doing it at the very last minute, and had gotten lazy about it. :( I'm just thrilled that you liked this, and especially the shirt, because quite frankly, I needed someone to tell me the shirt looks okay. :)