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steammmpunk ([personal profile] steammmpunk) wrote2007-05-14 12:52 am

Another Mission Gone Wrong

For Kink/Cliche Challenge. My prompt was Huddling for warmth/the sexual joys of hypothermia. There's no joy here, but after they get rescued by Teyla and Ronon (again), the 'omg-we're-not-dead' sex will ensue (again).






ETA: Upon request, I made some icons. If anyone wants to use it, or wants to make one out of this picture, feel free.

[identity profile] ileliberte.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 04:56 am (UTC)(link)
WOAH! ATMOSPHERE! Rodney's hands and the snowflakes are just amazing. Absolutely lovely work.

[identity profile] ileliberte.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 05:00 am (UTC)(link)
And also, the lighting on Rodney's right hand and the fade out on the left and the snowflakes going deep, oh man. ♥

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[identity profile] pentapus.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
There's something off about Rodney's mouth, but oh dear god, his hands, and John's nose--and face and the whole implied weight of him with the dark and the snow--LOVE. They really do feel like a spot of warmth in a cold night.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-15 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I also think there's something off about Rodney's lower face, I suspected maybe his nose or his upper lip, but I couldn't pinpoint exactly what's wrong. I'm very glad you liked this, and especially that you thought they do feel like a spot of warmth in a cold night (prompt accomplished!). Thank you!

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[identity profile] wickedwords.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 05:05 am (UTC)(link)
Oh! Oh! Oh! I love the story this tells.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-15 06:55 pm (UTC)(link)
*beams* Thank you so much!

[identity profile] eleveninches.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Oooooohhhhh this is so good!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-15 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay thank you! I'm so glad you liked this!

[identity profile] terribilita.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 05:19 am (UTC)(link)
Amazing! The hands, good god, the hands. *happy sigh*
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-15 11:40 pm (UTC)(link)
*beams* I'm so glad you liked it, thank you!

[identity profile] lovelokest.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 06:14 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my, this is so good! I love the snow and the black, and being the hurt/comfort junkie that I am, the bandages.

*loves*
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-15 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
As a hurt/comfort junkie myself, it makes me very happy to hear that, yay! Thank you!

[identity profile] lavvyan.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 06:16 am (UTC)(link)
I'll just join the hand squee. And the bloodstreak John leaves across Rodney's cheek - the angst! *sighs happily*
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it, and especially the blood streak - I kind of like them myself. Yay angst! *g*

[identity profile] hellpenguin.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 06:32 am (UTC)(link)
*huggles John's Elf Ears*

omg!

this is made of YAY!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you liked his Elf ears. *g* Thank you so much!

[identity profile] echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 06:46 am (UTC)(link)
So sweet ! Your colors make it all so sweet. And I have a crush on the pink noses, makes me squeal like a stupid fangirl.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 12:57 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and even more glad that you liked the pink noses.

[identity profile] nimnod.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 07:24 am (UTC)(link)
Love this so much. The little blood-smear which tells us that John did the bandaging almost hurts to look at, while simultaneously making me want to scoop them both up and hug them.

P.S. If you ever consider making this into an icon that you'd allow others to use, I'd be eternally grateful ;)
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
What a wonderful comment to receive. I'm thrilled that you liked this, and especially that you mentioned about John did the bandaging - that's exactly want I wanted with it. Thank you very much!

I made some icons, so if you want you're more than welcome to grab one of those, or make your own. *g*

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[identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 11:24 am (UTC)(link)
Gorgeous work!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so thrilled that you liked it!

[identity profile] devildoll.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 11:49 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, that's amazing. The snow, and John's thumb and Rodney's mouth and...*oh my heart*
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* Thank you! I'm so thrilled that you liked this. (Sorry for your heart, but uh, we all know they will get all the joy in the world soon, right? *g*)

[identity profile] crysothemis.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 12:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Holy effin' guh. That's gorgeous. I particularly love John's face, the weight of them together, the use of black, the blood stains, the snow.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you liked it!

[identity profile] dogeared.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 12:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, yes, yes, John's face is my favorite, I think, asdfljk, but the whole thing is so lovely!!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked this, and even more glad that you liked John's face. Yay!
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[personal profile] aurora 2007-05-14 01:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh man, this is AMAZING! The snow, and the hands, and for some reason I really love John's blood stained thumb.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* I'm so glad you liked this! I like John's blood stained thumb myself, just because it's Rodney's blood. *g* Thank you!
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[identity profile] machinistm.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
YES! YES! ALSO, HANDS! *LOVES*
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:09 am (UTC)(link)
YAY! Thank you so much!!
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[personal profile] fairestcat 2007-05-14 01:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is fabulous! I especially love the blood streak from John's thumb on Rodney's cheek. And the snow, which is very neatly done.

*wraps a blanket around the both of them*
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this! *beams*

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_redhead/ 2007-05-14 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)
beautiful work. big thumbs up from this girl.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:24 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much!

[identity profile] sheafrotherdon.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 02:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohhhhhhh! This is so beautiful! The details - John's pointed ear, Rodney's fingers, the way the snowflakes seem out of focus because we're so absorbed by the guys sharing body heat. SO lovely!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* I'm so thrilled that you liked this, and yes, we all are so absorbed by the boys, aren't we. *g* Thank you!

[identity profile] mangst.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 02:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I love all the little details.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much!
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[personal profile] siria 2007-05-14 05:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is gorgeous! The hands, and how solid John feels against Rodney -- really so very lovely.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this, and even more glad that the feel of John's solid weight went through. *beams*

[identity profile] neery.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, this is amazing.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
I'm just glad you liked this. Thank you so much!
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[identity profile] monanotlisa.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 08:05 pm (UTC)(link)
OH! I want to cuddle them and warm them so!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
Hee. I want to cuddle them and warm them too. Thank you very much!

[identity profile] insight2.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I like the black and soft white, it fits with the way the boys are probably opening and closing their eyes in the cold. Also, John's in Rodney's arms *snuggles*!
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this, and what a fantastic description of reasoning behind soft focused snow. As cheesy as it sounds, I just love to think boys in each other's arms. *g*

[identity profile] paperbinned.livejournal.com 2007-05-14 10:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. This is just incredible. Absolutely beautiful. LOVE the hands, and the ear and the smear.
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[identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! I'm just glad you liked this.

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